Chapter 2 Page 4

posted May 30th, 2010, 3:39 am


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May 30th, 2010, 3:39 am

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--EDIT---

Onee-sama's bubble can also say, "You're earlier than usual today"

But ah~ I'm lazy to edit it~ xD

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Is it too late to use Japanese terms? xD Been itching to use some~ xD

Onee-san (お姉さん): big sister (or a young lady), or onee-sama, or onee-chan.

Source : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_honorifics#Sama

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@Vervain
Thank you for your review as well as for the compliment!~<3

About your question, why its rather randomly named will be explained later in the story :3

@LadySilverWings
Thank you :3

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May 30th, 2010, 4:40 am

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Ooh new character in this mix of mystery~ lol XD

P.s. I know I've said this before, but your eye style ish love *adores it* They always draw me on every page lol XD

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May 30th, 2010, 5:20 am

Kairin Touzen

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oh no... a big sister... *I can sense trouble coming*

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May 31st, 2010, 9:06 pm

Vervain

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I thought I'd let you know (if you hadn't seen already) That I reviewed this per your request at "Lets Review Shall We?".

I like the art, as I stated in the review, but I have to ask... Why are the characters named ramdomly if this is set in Japan? I'm not sure it fits... And I had no idea it was supposed to be in Japan as opposed to "Japan-like place" until I read it on the homepage.

I think this story has a lot of potential, but I'd advise against sticking to popular cliches. Super kawaii desu will attract fans to you, but the story -is- going to suffer if you keep it at this pace.

Flesh out you characters, make it memorable. This could be a really interesting story, but you need to steer it away from being predictable and what we've seen 100 times before.

Good luck, keep at it~ And your art is very cute.

xxVervain

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June 22nd, 2010, 3:35 pm

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Onee-chan wa zettai kirai~!
(The older sister is very pretty!)

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